Hi Jim, here my feed backs :
- In brown, the strip look too large compared to the one on the costume.
- In orange, I think there is too many lines on yours. I count only 6 on the costume.
- In white, it might just be an optical illusion, but i found the corners too angular. On the costume, corners look more rounded.
- In red, on the costume, the nose part doesn't come to the lower edge. ( I don't know how to clearly explain what i think, I hope someone will understand what i mean. )
- In green, I think the upper line is too high. It looks to be a little bit lower on the costume. I've no side view picture but what I've seen at London, corners was more rounded.
- In purple, the strip's end look not aligned on the lower part of the helmet. The strip have a thickness.
Hope this will help you to make it better. Nice work Jim ! Following this.