Thanks for the detailed review! Overall, I am doubtful if these parts can make it to L2, but I'll keep making some improvements where suggested.
Helmet: Concur, will break up the back paint (there is no seam present, I was just extrapolating from the reference photo and its a little unnatural looking). Concur on the back decals, those guys are tricky for me to put on but I know I can do it better. I think I'll go with the thick, almost no-gap-between-them look from the reference screen caps instead of the RotJ style.
Flight Suit: Noted on the butt flap and thighs - both are stitched onto this old suit and I'm not sure it'll survive any adjustment. I like the suggestion about the L2 thighs, that would set a good precedent for newer troopers to do the flightsuit even more cost effectively. I just put in an order on a new flightsuit and will make those edits.
A few years ago, the Pathfinders moved the RotJ Scout CRL away from just mandarin collar and allowed for the open collar to match movie stills. Since some of the other components that aren't captured too well by the old computer graphics match the RotJ scout (flak vest for example), would you be interested in having this CRL match that CRL and allow for the folded, open collar? I'm just curious as it's not detailed that way on the in game model but I can't see enough detail for a mandarin collar either. In my mind, it lowers the barrier for entry on this costume if a new member just needs to buy an off-the-shelf flightsuit and hand stich some 2" elastic on the leg and a suede flap versus making a full mandarin collar.
Chest/Back: Will take photos to detail the unclear items.
Bund/Codpiece: The in-game model has a thinner cod when compared to a regular scout, so I thought it may be okay, but this cod is very small. I just put in an order for a new one.
Knees: I actually just couldn't find one of the straps after taking them off for painting. Sounds like I should lose the other one and swap them to just the bottom!
Boots: Soles are painted grey and the dogbone is a leather-like material.
Fitting Issues: Thanks for the tip, I'll drop them belt a little lower. I've been wearing Vader too often, he wears the belt very high up 😂. The cable out the back was my tightening strap for the neck gaiter, I'll use a typical balaclava next time so that doesn't pop out.