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IcyTrooper

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  1. Onto the Abdomen Armor now! I see that it is pretty much identical to the P2 realistic armor, so this makes sense why it was derived from that. Abdomen Armor Armor is painted gloss black. Two inset lines divide the abdomen armor into segments. Four holes, approximately ¼ inch (6.35mm) in diameter, are present in each inset line. Abdomen armor wraps around the wearer’s body and is sealed at the sides or back. Abdomen armor is completely contained under the chest and back armor.
  2. Thank you for those extra images! I can see about moving forward on the next piece. With regards to the details, if we can't see it on the screen then we can use the action figures/models as the supplementary reference and we take the closest matching amongst the models.
  3. Yeah I think we are going to be set to start putting the stuff into the CRL wiki. I've been doing Photoshop cutting of the images in the folder we have for this costume so that we have the images ready for upload and insertion. I need to get a few of you CRL editing accounts, but with the elections right now that is on hold. Most of the photos were already cut out and made for the CRL which was good, but there were a few that were missing. Either way we are in a good spot! The photos we have had are excellent quality.
  4. Thankssssssssss I have updated the text for the Electrostaff now. I think since it is a weapon we can be a little more lenient on it: Electrostaff Please also reference the gallery images when reviewing the text below. Electrostaff is approximately 84 inches (213.3cm) long and divided into five sections. Sections 1 and 2 are the ends of the electrostaff. Sections 1 and 2 may have the appearance of electricity emitting from it via the use of greeblies. If these greeblies exist they must be painted to match the reference photos or may be electronically lit matching the color of the reference photos. Sections 3 and 4 are the grip handles of the electrostaff. Section 5 is the middle section of the electrostaff. Sections 1 and 2 are approximately 16.5 inches (42cm) and have the following details: A prong-like tab greeblie with raised ends that has 2 circles removed in the middle of the raised part of the greeblie. This is located on the butt end of the electrostaff. The butt end of the electrostaff is a circular tube segment with circular indentions evenly spaced near the end of the segment. This segment is attached to the next segment via a thread-like connection. The butt end of the electrostaff has an inner depressed ring with 4 circular indentions evenly spaced around the outer edge of that inner depressed ring. The next segment from the thread-like connection resembles the shape of a bullet with a flat end as it connects to another cylindrical segment and has a ringed connector piece which connections sections 1 and 3 to sections 2 and 4. Sections 3 and 4 are approximately 14 inches (36cm) and have the following details: The outermost connection that connect to sections 1 and 5 resemble that of section 5 in design. It is ribbed with 4 evenly spaced, circular rods that run the length of the connection. The innermost connection that connections section 5 also resemble that of section 5 in design. It is ribbed with 4 evenly spaced, circular rods that run the length of the connection. The middle part is textured resembling a grip around the entire length of the section. Both of the textured sections will have a circular button with a ring as if it was used to turn on the electrostaff. This button does not need to be functional and may sit on a beveled base. Section 5 is approximately 35 inches (88.9cm) long and has the following details: The middle section of the staff is ribbed. There are 4 evenly spaced, circular rods that run the length of the middle section. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Sections 1 and 2: In addition to the 4 circular indentions that are evenly spaced around the outer edge of the depressed inner ring, there are an additional 4 circular indentions that are on each side of the prong-like greeblie within the inside of the inner ring matching the reference photo. These sections must have the appearance of electricity emitting from it via the use of greeblies. They must be electronically lit matching the color of the reference photos. Section 5: Where ribbed sections come together there are 2 circular indentions on each side of the raised connection. These are only on 2 of 4 sides in between the circular rods, each on opposite sides.
  5. I'm looking at this and then looking at other detachment armor text for some inspiration, especially CTD and FISD with TCW and Rebels costumes and they are often listed as detail indents. We should require that, not painted or stickers, for basic as there is precedence for that and for LMO review.
  6. Yep you will be the CRL model for it, so as long as we have pictures that cover every part that is in the CRL and have the main front/back pic we are set. I'm a little behind on wrapping up review of that Electrostaff, but I'm skipping out on something tonight so that I can go through the text once more and post it for us. Once we verify we have pictures for everything that is in the CRL I can request a CRL unlock and we can start putting it in there.
  7. For the Backpack Radio I was trying to see what we could see within the screen images but as we know, they are VERY hard to see. We can utilize the model images as supporting images for the basis of the CRL text and should place them within the gallery of the CRL (which is why I added a line about that). Backpack Radio Backpack Radio is painted gloss black. Please also reference the gallery images when referencing the below details. Radio consists of a horizontal top panel and front panel and vertical side panels. Front and side lower panels angle inward to meet bottom panel. The top plate has rectangular recessed area that includes the following details: Clips on the left and right side appear to attach the backpack radio to back armor. The center of these clips have a screw, rivet, or similar method of attachment that is painted black and does not need to be functional. A short, thick antenna with a funnel-like base is mounted on top left. Large slide switch near right of antenna base. Next to slide switch is 1 long vertical rectangle, 2 shorter horizontal stacked rectangles and 1 long vertical rectangle. Right of the long vertical rectangle is a raised cone shaped cylinder with a flat top and a recessed round button. Next to the round button is a small vertical rectangular button. A beveled edge runs around the outside of the top panel. The front plate has the follow details: Recessed band runs horizontally across center. On the upper left side within the recessed band there is a square with shallow slope angled downwards. Long horizontal recessed rectangle sits above 3 circular inset shapes. The rectangle is divided in half by a diagonal bar and is filled with recessed diagonal bars. The 3 circular inset shapes each have 2 inset rings. Bottom angled panel has a circular button on bottom left corner. The left side panel has the follow details: Horizontal recessed band aligns with band on front and ends at raised side panel. Raised side panel runs from the center of the bottom angled panel and extends just above the top panel. Slightly raised vertical rectangle with 5 equally spaced horizontal raised rectangles with beveled bottoms. Horizontal rectangular red lens at bottom of side panel. The lens may be painted to give the effect it is lit or it may be electronically lit producing a steady, non-blinking, light that is red in color. The right side panel has horizontal recessed band that aligns with recessed band on front. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Horizontal rectangular red lens at bottom of side panel of backpack is lit using LEDs or the equivalent, in a steady, non-flashing manner.
  8. I'll need to update the Chest Armor then to match what we have for the Back Armor then. I put that text in purple. Back Armor Painted gloss black. Backpack radio is permanently attached to back armor. Chest and back armor match together at the sides via a connection piece: The connection between the chest and the back armor may be fabric, elastic, plastic or rubber, so as it closely matches the armor color. Shoulder straps are slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points or attached behind them. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Shoulder straps must be slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points.
  9. Yeah L2 is definitely good for the finer details on this and we can even through reference images into the Gallery like I had mentioned and planned on to assist us and the GMLs. I'm planning on reviewing this tomorrow to push through. My brain is fried after helping get the rest of those trading cards done and work today. I know that we have a lot of the images already in a Google Drive folder and are edited, so we are in really good shape.
  10. I think the Back Armor looks good with the text that was presented with a slight tweak for the slotting of the detail ridges like we did for the chest: Back Armor Painted gloss black. Backpack radio is permanently attached to back armor. Chest and back armor match together at the sides with no gap and a seam line is present. The connection between the chest and the back armor may be fabric, elastic, plastic or rubber, so as it closely matches the armor color. Shoulder straps are slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points or attached behind them. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Shoulder straps must be slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points.
  11. I'm going to finalize this for the Kama: Kama The exterior is a black leather or leather-like material. Any stitching that is used is black. The exterior is divided into 4 large panels and has the following details: Three small pleated panels, roughly 1.5 inches (40mm) per panel, of equal height are stacked vertically at the bottom of the Kama. The rear center of the Kama has a slit that runs from the bottom and stops a third of the way from the top. A red corded seam runs along the front edge on both sides and matches the red used on the armor. The inner lining fabric has a pattern representing black cogs on a red background (vinyl material acceptable) and has the following details: The inner lining is divided into 4 large panels that run top to bottom. Black repeating cog pattern covers the entire interior. Each row is offset from the row above and below and are roughly 1/2 inches (12.7mm) in diameter. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The exterior is black leather. The red on the inner liner fabric is raised, giving the appearance of an embossed pattern.
  12. Hello and welcome! I can hopefully answer these for you: The E11 Holster is indeed mounted to the belt via fasteners that can be rivets, snaps or Chicago screws (this picture shows Chicago screws) and they are painted black. It is mounted close to the location below on the left side of the belt/wearer and only has the two fasteners through the bottom of the belt. Some belts have 4 fasteners (two on each side top and bottom), the 4 fasteners is NOT correct. It cannot be looped around the belt, only affixed from behind. From the picture, even though it is a little small, there doesn't appear to be any issues I can see from the front that would prohibit and approval from your GML. I noticed there is Velcro on one of the shoulder bells probably from mounting a patch or something. That isn't in the CRL, but your GML would be the one approving it or not.
  13. @dewannawanga Thanks for the clarity! I guess I was trying to figure out if it was a true split or if it was hemmed so that it was a fold-over on a seam? I've looked for proper sewing definitions, kind of like how I that piping was really a "corded seam". @tipperaryred Ahhh, okay, I was wondering. I usually move the stuff over from the later pages into the main once we are good with the text. If you have done that on a few that is good, just want to make sure it gets carried over right so that when we get to the Wiki we don't have to go back for a major error. I see what you did now, so we are good! @smoszer I appreciate you guys taking the helm on this and apologize for the oversight in getting staff members in the review process. I didn't realize that we were absent from it! As a fellow GML, I too appreciate more clear writing that's for sure! If you can get those references for me that are clearer that'll help ease my mind and we can proceed.
  14. It does look correct to me. Our top greeblies match that of the Biker Scout in ROTJ.
  15. Since you are working on the Kama this weekend we can go out of order on the finalization of text. I had to look around to make sure I could find it in all these pages, but I finally did! I did any changes in purple for now, but I do have a question about the red text. I'm having a hard time figuring out where this is. Kama The exterior is a black leather or leather-like material. Any stitching that is used is black. The exterior is divided into 4 large panels and has the following details: Three small pleated panels, roughly 1.5 inches (40mm) per panel, of equal height are stacked vertically at the bottom of the Kama. There is a slit separating the back center of the Kama that runs from the bottom and stops a third of the way from the top. A red corded seam runs along the front edge on both sides and matches the red used on the armor. The inner lining fabric has a pattern representing black cogs on a red background (vinyl material acceptable) and has the following details: The inner lining is divided into 4 large panels that run top to bottom. Black repeating cog pattern covers the entire interior. Each row is offset from the row above and below and are roughly 1/2 inches (12.7mm) in diameter. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): The exterior is black leather. The red on the inner liner fabric is raised, giving the appearance of an embossed pattern.
  16. There is currently no provisions for straps to be affixed to any optional blaster. I'd consult your GML on what would be acceptable based on your locale.
  17. I put in the text for the DC-15 blasters as I don't think we need to rewrite those from the work was done with CTD. I'm in favor for simplifying the text a bit for accessibility of materials globally, but instead of doing each section maybe we draw a reference to those reference images in the gallery of the CRL and instead list the section count? I did put a part in red below that I need help with. Is there only 1 button or truly 2 of them? I looked at the CAD drawing that you provided (well done, by the way!) and it shows 2 there but wasn't sure in-game. I took the overall length you had stated for it and did a reduction of 14% to go from the 248.2cm on the CAD drawing to the 213.3cm listed in the text draft. I did that for sections 1 & 5 and 2 & 4. An example of what I mean would be this for the Electrostaff: Electrostaff Please also reference the gallery images when reviewing the text below. Electrostaff is approximately 84 inches (213.3cm) long and divided into five sections. Sections 1 and 5 are the ends of the electrostaff. Sections 1 and 5 may have the appearance of electricity emitting from it via the use of greeblies. If these greeblies exist they must be painted to match the reference photos or may be electronically lit matching the color of the reference photos. Sections 2 and 4 are the grip handles of the electrostaff. Section 5 is the middle section of the electrostaff. Sections 1 and 5 are approximately 14 inches (35.5cm) and have the following details: A prong-like tab greeblie with raised ends that has 2 circles removed in the middle of the raised part of the greeblie. This is located on the butt end of the electrostaff. The butt end of the electrostaff is a circular tube segment with circular indentions evenly spaced near the end of the segment. This segment is attached to the next segment via a thread-like connection. The butt end of the electrostaff has an inner depressed ring with 4 circular indentions evenly spaced around the outer edge of that inner depressed ring. The next segment from the thread-like connection resembles the shape of a bullet with a flat end as it connects to another cylindrical segment and has a ringed connector piece which connections sections 1 and 5 to sections 2 and 4. Sections 2 and 4 are approximately 11 inches (27.9cm) and have the following details: The outermost connection that connect to sections 1 and 5 resemble that of section 5 in design. It is ribbed with 4 evenly spaced, circular rods that run the length of the connection. The innermost connection that connections section 5 also resemble that of section 5 in design. It is ribbed with 4 evenly spaced, circular rods that run the length of the connection. The middle part is textured resembling a grip around the entire length of the section. Only one of the textured sections will have a circular button with a ring as if it was used to turn on the electrostaff. This button does not need to be functional and may sit flush with the rest of the section. Section 5 is approximately 35 inches (88.9cm) long and has the following details: The middle section of the staff is ribbed. There are four evenly spaced, circular rods that run the length of the middle section. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Sections 1 and 5: In addition to the 4 circular indentions that are evenly spaced around the outer edge of the depressed inner ring, there are an additional 4 circular indentions that are on each side of the prong-like greeblie within the inside of the inner ring matching the reference photo. These sections must have the appearance of electricity emitting from it via the use of greeblies. They must be electronically lit matching the color of the reference photos. Section 5: Where ribbed sections come together there are 2 circular indentions on each side of the raised connection. These are only on 2 of 4 sides in between the circular rods, each on opposite sides.
  18. Got it, we did have mention about the lack of a gap on the sides but we should definitely clarify that they are connected at the sides with a material. I also agree that functioning electronics should be an L2 item. That has generally been standard around the Legion. I added stuff in purple below, but may be worth a secondary glance to ensure it isn't confusing. Chest Armor Painted gloss black. The positioning descriptions with reference to left and right are as if you are a looking at the armor from the front. Two raised rectangles aligned vertically in center of armor. The left rectangle has small raised line along outside edge. The right rectangle extends slightly above the left rectangle and has a small notch shape on right edge and 4 small horizontal rectangles on the lower left corner. Raised 4 sided greeblie is located on the lower left side of the armor with a raised circle that has a round red lens on top and a raised vertical rectangle below the lens. The lens may be painted to give the effect it is lit or it may be electronically lit producing a steady, non-blinking, light that is red in color. Two raised vertical rectangles on the lower right side of the armor. Chest and back armor match together at the sides with no gap and a seam line is present. The connection between the chest and the back armor may be fabric, elastic, plastic or rubber, so as it closely matches the armor color. Shoulder straps are slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points or attached behind them. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Shoulder straps must be slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points. The round red lens is electronically lit producing a steady, non-blinking, light that is red in color.
  19. To second what @Hoda said, I feel those are good for the costume, but it is ultimately up to your GML.
  20. Got the text updated for the Gloves, that should be good for now. I'll post the Chest Armor below so that we can verify that. I added the L2 detail for this to match what we had for the Electrostaff Purge Trooper since it does appear that they are that way into the slots but the same look can be achieved if it is behind the armor as well. Chest Armor Painted gloss black. The positioning descriptions with reference to left and right are as if you are a looking at the armor from the front. Two raised rectangles aligned vertically in center of armor. The left rectangle has small raised line along outside edge. The right rectangle extends slightly above the left rectangle and has a small notch shape on right edge and 4 small horizontal rectangles on the lower left corner. Raised 4 sided greeblie is located on the lower left side of the armor with a raised circle that has a round red lens on top and a raised vertical rectangle below the lens. Two raised vertical rectangles on the lower right side of the armor. Chest and back armor match together at the sides with no gap and a seam line is present. Shoulder straps are slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points or attached behind them. OPTIONAL Level two certification (if applicable): Shoulder straps must be slotted into the detail ridges of the top connection points.
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